I thought that your blog was very good but maby you could add more voice. Like add your oppinion in more or use some question marks or exclamation points.
I think for one you should of told your point of view more often to tell the reader what your opinion on the object was. I also think you could work on using more examples in your blog. Overall it was great!!
I thought that your blog was very good but maby you could add more voice. Like add your oppinion in more or use some question marks or exclamation points.
ReplyDeleteI think for one you should of told your point of view more often to tell the reader what your opinion on the object was. I also think you could work on using more examples in your blog. Overall it was great!!
ReplyDeleteI would add a little more voice or attitude into your posts, but other than that i thought your blog was Great!
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